Black velvet in my hands,
Pressed against my chest,
Spreading warmth into my body,
I know that mine is best.
Growing ever stronger, bigger
And taller than before
Leaner, faster, braver, better-
I know that I want more!
Face to face and eye to eye,
A connection new is formed.
Hand in hand and oh so close,
My once cold heart is warmed.
And though I know black velvet,
Blue silk shall not replace,
I think that it’s compensation good,
When I look upon his face.
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Comments
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very nicely done. kinda odd, but nicely done. cute. and the whole butter in my eye thing is a quote I thought would be funny to have in everyone's notes. you see I have accidentally a variety of times stuck butter in my eye.
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MMM...
just something about this..feels nice.
good work lady!

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Wow, this is beautiful!
Oddly, it meant a lot to me.
It went really deep. :]

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o_0
though i know not what you are speaking of...
"I know that I want more!"
sounds rahter kinky.
=P
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it's not kinky at alllllllll =]
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