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Black Velvet

Black velvet in my hands,
Pressed against my chest,
Spreading warmth into my body,
I know that mine is best.

Growing ever stronger, bigger
And taller than before
Leaner, faster, braver, better-
I know that I want more!

Face to face and eye to eye,
A connection new is formed.
Hand in hand and oh so close,
My once cold heart is warmed.

And though I know black velvet,
Blue silk shall not replace,
I think that it’s compensation good,
When I look upon his face.

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  • LadyOfFate
    September 17, 2008

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    very nicely done. kinda odd, but nicely done. cute. and the whole butter in my eye thing is a quote I thought would be funny to have in everyone's notes. you see I have accidentally a variety of times stuck butter in my eye.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    MMM...

    just something about this..feels nice.
    good work lady!


  • Curious LiLi
    August 31, 2008
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    Wow, this is beautiful!
    Oddly, it meant a lot to me.
    It went really deep. :]


  • sora.
    August 31, 2008

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    o_0
    though i know not what you are speaking of...
    "I know that I want more!"
    sounds rahter kinky.
    =P

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