I'm sorry
I'm Horrible
I'm terrible
I'm not forgiven
I'm always the one to trip and hit you
I'm hopeless
I'm alone
I'm vile to her because of what she says about you
I'm never going to grasp you fully which means
I'm never going to get happiness or anything in betweens
I'm always thinking about you
I'm never ending this run on sentence in my head
I'm trying to understand just what I can do
I'm wanting to show you how much I love-
OH, but I'm to afraid to finish because if I tried to show you
I'm sure you'll push my heart right down my throat and
try to make it stick with glue, cause my doubts wont let me move, cause I think that's
what your going to do, If I try you'll hurt me for sure
Maybe
I'm just plain afraid of what you might say, and afraid of all of the above
Or
Maybe
I'm just to scared of being rejected by the only one I lo-
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The wordplay in here is frickin' BRILLIANT
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Thanks
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*sigh* dop it!_ur a meanie head to urself >doooopppp it! is a good poem if it werent actually about u
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cool...
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love it!!!!
i love it it's so so awesome and it's soo ture i can really relate to this =]]]
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I really like the fact that you never finish the sentence or in some cases, the word. That, more than the statements made elsewhere in the poem, indicates the level of hesitation and fear of the speaker.
*Line 18: your= you're
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-_- ur none of those mean things....and ull get the only one u love...try harder.......and maddie....thx 4 saying tht....i knew it was tru...bye....4ever
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Ok #1 you are NOT horrible or terrible or hopeless or alone or vile or any of that stuff! Being afraid is fine... its normal. My philoshpy is that everything happens for a reason and edventually everything turns for the better... and everything will be fine in the end... I dont know if my philoshpy is true but i believe it... Everythingll be fine
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