The downward spiral
echoing footsteps left with disdainful reproach
swallowed in chaotic abandon
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love your final line!
The imagery in that is explosive on it's own then combined with the first two lines this is a fantastic take on the picture
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Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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I thank you for your comments. This is something I really enjoy. Prompts take me to a whole othre level. The challenge is awesome.
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wow a brilliant take on the promt full of sad powerful emotions good luck in the contest
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Amazing, for so few words it really says a lot. Best of luck my dear friend. You amaze me as always.
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Ok, sorry, this is random, but I saw the title and was like, "wow!"
Did you know The Downward Spiral is the title of a Nine Inch Nails album? LOL! That's so intense.
Anyways, about your thirteen words. I thought the wordchoice was terrific. You made the most out of such short requirements. "Chaotic abandon" is wonderful. Great write and good luck!
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Great title, nice piece!
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