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downturn

Missing image
ad hoc measures;
bested by below.

regardless of glow;
slipped off life's plateau.
 
 
 

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Picture Credit: http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    o.O
    Should have been a sign somewhere, Beware of Stairs.

    Excellent imagery in just 13 words

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Nice bit of rhyming there!!

    "ad hoc measures" reminds me of work (we do ad hoc research lol)

    So easy to make that slip....


  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008

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    I loved the take on the picture. I especially liked the last two lines. This is great work especially considering you had so few words to work with. Best wishes x


  • Cannonsfire
    August 31, 2008

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    lol it would be a long way down bro. C

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