Inhale life,
breath in moments one by one-
because forever's happening right now...
Author notes
pic: http://bosniak.deviantart.com/art/Forever-Lost-54681896
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A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture VI by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 4, 2008, 30 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The last line is great in the rush of the moment, I actually felt my head speed up!
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Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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a brilliant take on the promt good luck in the contest
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I oved your opening line, the idea of inhaling life was a wonderful one. I also loved your closing line, that really made me think and I believe that shows great poetry. I also liked the title, the way it seemed to fit but didn't seem too obvious. Great work x
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i like the concept, forever is happening now...
nice take & best wishes~
tim
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Wow...this is great.Especially with a most agreeable title.Very nice.
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