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Fractal

i Know you
are Waiting for
me

at the bottom of
this Fractal

A contest entry

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  • Tehuni
    September 8, 2008
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    I don't know if I just really like 13, or if it's the simple poems or what, but I like this


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 2, 2008

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    Great 13 words; I love how you let them know you are aware they are waiting for you ... softly sad

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • maralisa silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contest

  • Broken-Bones
    September 1, 2008
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    I thought this was a really intersting take on the propmt. I loved the way you portrayed the image and the way you used the shape of a fractal to aid this. I also loved the idea of someone waiting at the bottom, that idea sent my mind wandering and added something special to the piece. Great work x