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Whispers

Listening to the whispers of those
That were left behind, I long
For the moment that I
Step into your world of sanctuary.

Trailing behind the darkned
Alleyways of the inner city,
I taste the scent of your passion
Within the bowels of my soul.

Caressing the forgiveness that
Beings portray, I rip the safety net
From beneath you, swallowing you,
Nesting my offspring within your heart.

Watching you fall to your knees
Begging for life and love,
I stare into your eyes and
Welcome you to the leigions of many.

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  • XxrockxXxgirlxX
    September 1, 2008

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    Awesome. It made me think of a vampire going for his/her prey. Or just some sort of intense monster in general.


  • ArchOblivion
    August 31, 2008
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    I quite enjoyed reading this. Amazing, simply put.