Starting the reading with this poem should catch the attention of my audience though they may find it somewhat dated. My theme is the affect of war upon the lives of solidiers and of those who remain at home. Many of the soldiers in Tennyson's poem, which is based upon an actual historical battle, at Balakava in the Crimean War, did not return home. Their lives were ended, not just altered. Many of those who survived were probably affected by what we would now call Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome, a normal human reaction to the horrors of war. This disorder was not recognized in those days and Tennyson was still attempting to uphold the values of king and country. He doesn't present the other side, the human lives that were devastated. My other, more modern readings will present that side; by the time they were written, some poets had achieved a greater awareness of a grimmer aspect of war.
And now my reading of
The Charge of the Light Brigade
Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!
Charge for the guns!' he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
'Forward, the Light Brigade!'
Was there a man dismay'd ?
Not tho' the soldier knew
Some one had blunder'd:
Their's not to make reply,
Their's not to reason why,
Their's but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre-stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death,
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.
When can their glory fade ?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wonder'd.
Honour the charge they made!
Honour the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred!
My next reading, War Girls by Jessie Pope, deals with a topic which may seem a lot more mundane than The Charge of the Light Brigade. The women in the poem keep things going while the men get to go off and risk their lives. Pope didn't glorify this at all and I would think the affect on these women would be a good one since it gave them an opportunity to get out of the house and experience a more exciting way of life, "No longer caged and penned up."
Let's allow the poem speak for itself.
War Girls
'There's the girl who clips your ticket for the train,
And the girl who speeds the lift from floor to floor,
There's the girl who does a milk-round in the rain,
And the girl who calls for orders at your door.
Strong, sensible, and fit,
They're out to show their grit,
And tackle jobs with energy and knack.
No longer caged and penned up,
They're going to keep their end up
'Til the khaki soldier boys come marching back.
There's the motor girl who drives a heavy van,
There's the butcher girl who brings your joint of meat,
There's the girl who calls 'All fares please!' like a man,
And the girl who whistles taxi's up the street.
Beneath each uniform
Beats a heart that's soft and warm,
Though of canny mother-wit they show no lack;
But a solemn statement this is,
They've no time for love and kisses
Till the khaki soldier boys come marching back.
The poem suggests that women do feel some suffering as they wait for their men to return since they know that perhaps these men never will return. Pope glorifies this aspect of women's lives since not all women would have waited for that one special "khaki boy".
Women, like men, were trapped by forces beyond their control and their lives were changed. War Girls was considered a pro-war poem and Dulce et Decorum Est was "a distinct response to her writing," according to OldPoetry.
My next selection is The Superfluous Woman by Vera Brittain. War Girls is an upbeat poem which accentuates the adventurous aspects of being a woman and "doing your bit" in a time of war. In The Superfluous Woman, Vera Brittain has chosen to deal with the sadness and isolation of a woman bereaved by war. Both the war girls and the superfluous woman are all ordinary people, whose lives are changed by forces beyond their control.
The Superfluous Woman
Ghosts crying down the vistas of the years,
Recalling words
Whose echoes long have died,
And kind moss grown
Over the sharp and blood-bespattered stones
Which cut our feet upon the ancient ways.
But who will look for my coming?
Long busy days where many meet and part;
Crowded aside
Remembered hours of hope;
And city streets
Grown dark and hot with eager multitudes
Hurrying homeward whither respite waits.
But who will seek me at nightfall?
Light fading where the chimneys cut the sky;
Footsteps that pass,
Nor tarry at my door.
And far away,
Behind the row of crosses, shadows black
Stretch out long arms before the smouldering sun.
But who will give me my children?
Here's my next reading
The Hero
- Seigfried Sassoon
'Jack fell as he'd have wished,' the mother said,
And folded up the letter that she'd read.
'The Colonel writes so nicely.' Something broke
In the tired voice that quivered to a choke.
She half looked up. 'We mothers are so proud
Of our dead soldiers.' Then her face was bowed.
Quietly the Brother Officer went out.
He'd told the poor old dear some gallant lies
That she would nourish all her days, no doubt
For while he coughed and mumbled, her weak eyes
Had shone with gentle triumph, brimmed with joy,
Because he'd been so brave, her glorious boy.
He thought how 'Jack', cold-footed, useless swine,
Had panicked down the trench that night the mine
Went up at Wicked Corner; how he'd tried
To get sent home, and how, at last, he died,
Blown to small bits. And no one seemed to care
Except that lonely woman with white hair.
The mother in The Hero is trying to make herself feel better by glorifying her son's useless death, a tradition of noble sacrifice often practiced by mothers bereaved in battle. Jack's commanding officer supports the mother's view of things though, in his opinion, Jack has not behaved heroically at all. Again, Jack's behaviour conforms to what a lot of us in more modern times would consider a normal reaction to horror and stupidity.
Dulce Et Decorum Est Pro Patria Mori
Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs,
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots,
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame, all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of gas-shells dropping softly behind.
Gas! GAS! Quick, boys! — An ecstasy of fumbling
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time,
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime.—
Dim through the misty panes and thick green light,
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
In all my dreams before my helpless sight
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
If in some smothering dreams, you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin,
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs
Bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues, —
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.
I will close with an example of the lie that Wilfrid Owen is referring to, a lie that has become less and less sweet and proper as we move further into the 21st Century. I won't read all of the poem. It's one of those long, historical poems by MacCauley, much too long in my opinion. This is his account of Horatius at the bridge. I remember listening to this in Latin class many years ago read by our Latin teacher, an elderly lady who didn't say whether she beleived these lines or not.
And how can men die better than facing fearful odds
For the ashes of their fathers and the temples of their gods?
Ordinary men, who may or may not have believed they were fighting for a good cause. They had no choice.
Thank you. I hope you have enjoyed these readings.
Author notes
Prompt - War
I hope you will count the lines from McCauley as one complete selection. I really wouldn't want to read the whole thing!
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/2073-Alfred-Lord-Tennyson-The-Charge-Of-The-Light-Brigade
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/52140-Jessie-Pope-War-Girls
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/30202-Vera-Brittain-The-Superfluous-Woman
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/33903-Siegfried-Sassoon-The-Hero
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/3336-Wilfred-Owen-Dulce-Et-Decorum-Est-Pro-Patria-Mori
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/11732-Thomas-Babbington-Macaulay-Horatius
A contest entry
- COLUMN: Poems For Reading Out Loud by Old Poetry.
1200 points, ended October 7, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what's your opinion of this?
Comments
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I've read your entry before but didn't get the chance to comment. Your selection of poems is very good, and so is the way you presented it.
Congratulations with the gold
Mari


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A fine opening, attention-grabbing choice with the "Light Brigade" was followed by what some might consider an awkward choice given Pope's lack of favour in some people eyes because of her poem "Who's for the Game" http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/52141. But your choice of "War Girls" shows both the positive spirit of the women of the times and the value of "those-they-left-behind" in coping with the daily life in the absence of the "khaki soldiers".
Following this by the Superfluous Woman" was an inspired choice withn its contrast both of poetic style and its attitude.
Then we bring on the really big guns with Sassoon and his perfect5ly crafted tale of an officer delivering his C.O.'s notification-of-death letter. The whitewashing of the facts behind some of these stories is well covered and emphasises the custom of "de mortuis nil nisi bonum dicendum est " not speaking ill of the dead. Then to move onto another Latin tag poem with Owen's offering was almost automatic, it would be so hard not to include that old chestnut.
You rounded it off well with the final couplet describing an old battle with words that would still apply today and would be sure to appeal to your chosen audience.
You also linked your poems with reasonable clarity which is an essential in an event of this nature.
I would be happy to either listen to or actually deliver such a poetry session. Well Done.
Jim
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What I have read so far coupled with what I know of the remaining poems makes me impatient for the linkages you will write.
The way you moved from Tennyson to Pope, two vastly different writers, was well handled and so, I hope, will the others be.
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/2073-Alfred-Lord-Tennyson-The-Charge-Of-The-Light-Brigade
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/52140-Jessie-Pope-War-Girls
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/30202-Vera-Brittain-The-Superfluous-Woman
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/33903-Siegfried-Sassoon-The-Hero
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/3336-Wilfred-Owen-Dulce-Et-Decorum-Est-Pro-Patria-Mori
http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/11732-Thomas-Babbington-Macaulay-Horatius section XXVII -
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Thanks so much, Jim. I think that's finished now but I will have another edit before the deadline.
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I see you working hard once again Judyx3 to get your point across and make it interesting for the reader.
I have to applaud your choices. Von

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Thanks for your offering, I look forward to seeing more as time goes by. I shall keep it open until the month end.



