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Lying Under Waves of White



Beneath the white waves
Curled around demonic smiles
Heart of glass that broke.


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I chose option 2, sub-option 3.

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    Another one of the demon poems I liked, just needs a little twicking. My opinion of course feel free to disagree. take out the caps and period thier not needed. Last line I think would read better as "glass heart broken". thx for entering.