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Fire ignites...Power and Mercy

 

Fire ignites

Purpose-fully

In the Lair of Dragon

relent-less power and mercy.

 

Unto us has arrived,

A lone maiden

Claiming to be;

A Fire Ignitor

***Of Life***

 

Wicks of eternal

hunger….

feed the flames

that feast within us.

 

She claims to bear

a gift; the treasured

Seeds of Knowledge

and Discernment.

 

The Sword of Truth

rang out piercingly,

gathering us together.

Undetermined yet…..

Whether we devour,

or Allow her flesh to live.

 

Upon her slender frame,

she carries a canvas bag

of moistened earth.

Scatters it about the ground

and squints to plant.

 

Seeds of radish, cucumber,

and tears of grief.

Standing in celtic beauty;

her voice loudly exclaims

enraging our thrones mightily! 

 

Tell me what you doth see?

 

Poem Link: The Maiden, Fire Ignitor.

 

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4560803 

 
 

 

Will she live to see light of dawn?

 

 


 

Author notes

direct link to death of victory: The Maiden Fire Ignitor

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4560803



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Will she live or be devoured......power or mercy.

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  • banrion
    September 2, 2008
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    A lovely read and a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
    SJ


  • Romeo Dragonheart
    September 2, 2008

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    Beautiful I see an epic unfolding to rival even the poets of old, May the flames burn eternaly bright for you, The imagery was spectacular and the descriptions amazing, Great work all the way
    Romeo


  • DecadentDreamer
    September 1, 2008
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    very good


  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    I see a really good movie is what I see..lol. This was wonderful!! very mythical and yet it had a solid story line.. You did such a wonderful job with the imagery.. I'm really surprised.. Thank you very much for sharing..

    Angel


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    To me the poem seems a mystical fantasy. It is sort of a cross between New Age fantasy and Mort d'Arthur.

    Good job.

    Mike

  • Emcchesney
    August 31, 2008

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    How good is this? This is what poetry should be. great flow with energy in every soul of your being. The mystery of mystical pleasure surrounded my inner heart and lust that generated from your words ignited the fires of years past.

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