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Songbird

Those eyes that I stared into,
How I long to know what went through
Your head at that exact moment
When i felt the need to give you the world
If it would only make you smile.

I wish I had the answers for
All the questions that are floating
In your mind, to give you clarity
To see you happy, and  to make you feel
All the wonderful things that you make me.

Oh my little songbird, don't ever
Let that song of yours stop playing,

It's just far too beautiful.

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  • Barbara gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    *sniff*

    The last line sums this up perfectly....


  • suseann silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute expressed in that momentary "lightning struck" wonder of a vision precious is to the heart.


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    August 31, 2008

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    Well if venting gets it out in such forms, then it seems a very good way to clear your own head.
    The sound of a songbird is one that will keep any man inticed to keep its tones in earshot, Damn good write here Phil, well done.


  • Luckintheshadows
    August 31, 2008

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    WOW, well, this is certainly an incredibly beautiful vent! Your imagery is simply divine and there's just such a wonderfully free-feeling vibe that shines forth from your words...of course, that could just be me !
    Thank you for sharing this,

    Luck.
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