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The Cause Of My Desire

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The blood is surging through my veins,
my feelings never tire
As if you caused desire to burn,
and turned my love to fire

I feel the heat as you walk in,
my temperature starts to rise
Flush of face no turning back,
and no way to disguise

I touch your arm then start to melt,
the inferno starts to rage
A better chance I might have,
locked up in a cage

You call to me I must obey,
for now I am in a blaze
My passions flow, a wanton lust;
mind left in a haze

My time is now to taste your love,
so hot there’s no relief
In the end for what I search
would be our inner peace


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The prompt is a quote of uknown source-"A heart is a red hot pepper and love is a fire" (20 lines)

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    Humm..I like the immages and the touches of desires...well done..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...