I know who I dream of
it's him again
never did I realize it
but he's everything I want
everything I need
I love my 1st love
but he no longer loves me
I ruined it for myself
should have taken advantage of it
but the younger me was scared
now I'll never get that chance
he doesn't even notice me
acts like he never even met me
Every other boy was desprate
he wasn't
I' d do anything to get those moments back
maybe if i hadn't made that mistake he would notice
now I will have to live with the mistake my younger self made
hoping,wishing on a nonexistent star
I'll get that chance back
who knew I felt this way
who knew I'd regret that day
maybe another like him will come along
but I doubt it
my biggest mistake.......
was giving up you
Author notes
option 5. and if your confused it's about my 1st love named darius mayo who i met in 3rd grade
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wow
First love in 3rd grade.. I didnt even know how to spell it let alone feel it... But hey it happens... It really sucks letting someone you love go... but you learn to live with it and learn from the mistakes.. Now your next love will come along and you will learn what to do and what not to do.. So keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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this was good
i really liked the emotion you seemed to put in it that you for entering!
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