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Hurricane


  Whispers upon whispers,
coldness of slippers.

From the darkness,
shall she rise.

Like a diamond,
her sparkling eyes.

Long is her tail,
born from the earth's wail.

Calling her children,
the eyes of a billion.

Today she shall say,
what our words cannot pay.

For we are the day,
she blots the sun of our clay.

Brings terror and rain,
the storm goddess of vain.



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  • straighttalker gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Sparkling good job!

    Great imagery, and mystery - with a little surprise at the end! A little jewel of a poem, that I enjoyed.