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Without Him

Without Him I lose my way
  demons penetrate my soul
as I watch myself to be used as a puppet
  Spreading the hurt and anguish around
...through me
 
  those times without Him
I could not stand
  mind felt of fire, lost and alone

  Oh Lord forgive my foolish ways.

For without Him
  I am nothing

But with Him I am his servant.
As my hypocracy must be left in the past

  so I can find my purpose.
 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    And..you have found your purpose my friend..this is the proof..your poetry is the real proof of it..well done..

  • MorganTea
    September 1, 2008

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    God always forgives

    This poem is so true about a lot of people today. I loved how you showed repentance in your poem and I loved how you told you state at the beginning and told what you were looking forward to with God at the end. God is amazing and everything He does is because He love you and me!

    God bless --- a very nice poem


  • Jornada
    August 31, 2008

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    "And, so, what is there for me to look forward to, Lord? You are my hope!" Psalm 39:7 An American Translation