Leave your smell
to sleep on my pillow
leave the chestnuts of your eyes
to talk to the moon.
Leave your fingertips
to play harpsichord,
morning sonatina
on my skin.
Be the witness
of my lustful dreams.
Open the shell
of morning’s yawn,
stretch your limbs,
unclench tense muscles
touch the edge of my lips
where your kiss belongs.
Let me watch you
when you talk to my neck
and shoulders’ valley,
let me watch you
when your smile
talks to the dawn.
Author notes
Author of this beautiful painting "Music in the air II" is Darlene Zarosinski.
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Humm..let you watch the scenario..and let your muse write a heart warming poetry in between the momments..wonderful expereice you shared..well done...
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This poem sings its own song - one of soft sensuality and romance and I had visions of a what I call a "morning song" here. This just pulled a deep sigh from me and painted a smile on my face. The music here is so very intimate and tender, free-flowing like water over stones. I agree with Wanda: this sonatina is so very much you... you should have called this Sonjatina! Lovely poetry - thank you for sharing it with us in the contest.
~ Nicolette
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Thank you dear Nicolette. Well, yes, that's singing me and my poetry. And your poetical comment makes me to
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being the lustful lover of lady poetry, that's a he-poet's impossible dream knowing lady poetry will at best reveal her ankle yet never her knee. are you, though, revealing your knee, lady? in words imbibed with lust unseen yet inebriating, with fragrances unreleased yet invading? the music of words played with such deceiving innocence by a lady which transforms daily more an more into... lady poetry...
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Aaah, what a comment. Thank you.
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Soft and wonderful
Such beauty and warmth in your words.
Makes me want to re-think getting out of bed.
Jim
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Thank you Jim. It's always nice to see you back.
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Wow - That Is A Beautiful Painting
And a beautiful poem as well - ti si naj bolja - with this poem you should win gold - so much romance in this piece - you sure know how to reach the heart moja Sonja - your poetry is always exciting - it paints a vivid picture to warm the heart - blush blush - Bless God - Josip - Dobar dan ---------------------------------------------- zdravlje
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Hvala na komentaru. Vidim da je jezik predaka još uvijek u srcu. Thank you for your comment. I see that tha language of your ancestors is still alive in your heart. Thank you for this so nice comment
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EVER SO LOVELY!!!
There is such deep passionate love within your lines! Ever so subtle yet so beautiful and sweet!
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Thank you Kevin.
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"Open the shell
of morning’s yawn"
Lovely poetry to arise by, my Friend...Perhaps it should be called a "Sonjatina", instead, eh? lol Good luck in Nic's contest, Sweetie.
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You are incredible my dear friend, thank you for this idea, maybe somebody will bring it to life, lol and thanks for good wishes.
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this poem reads very lyrical indeed, this is such a gorgeous 'love song'...it reads & feels so light, and leaves the reader feeling of floating on air. You have captured the essence of the contest theme here perfectly, I think, best of luck, Sonja
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Thank you my dear friend.
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