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I Will Always Ask Why?

Missing image
One final touch, a kiss goodbye,
another tear, another why?
A day for hearts to break in two,
to say farewell is hard to do.

Bring forth life, birthing pains,
only overwhelming joy remains.
Hold them close to our hearts,
lifetime of happiness starts.

Years of nurture,ups and downs,
skinned knees, smiles and frowns.
Never imagined you not here,
till that fateful day last year.

A day ingrained in heart and mind,
sudden death is so unkind.
So many reminders day after day,
ever since God took you away.

Hold onto faith as I still ask why,
so soon we had to say goodby?
Good days, bad days come and go,
memories, teardrops, mingle, flow.

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Miss and love you sweet son.

The pain settles forever deep.

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 6, 2008

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    Superb plus

    A very fine write, and tribute. You have my empathy. Very well worded indeed. Thanks for sharing this write on such a personal; and sensitive topic. Please take care.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 6, 2008
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      Thank You

      I appreciate your thoughtful comment. Always nice to hear from you. Hope the day is going well. Take care. Sandy
  • mcheadle
    August 31, 2008

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    A poem of beauty

    May it never destroy the days and life you have yet to live. To remember the one you had and loved , your blessing from above. We must remember the were only a loan. He like you and I must answere to God. He gives, but like I once said the gift was only a loan.
    Taken back when He says it is time. One day again he will day say Hey it is me Mom. God is planning a great and wonnderful day for the two of you and many others...mac


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 3, 2008
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      Thank you Mac. Always nice when you stop in. You take care. Sandy

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    August 31, 2008

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    Oh hun, my heart is beating with yours
    Beautifully penned hun

    Stay safe♥


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 3, 2008
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      Thank you Amanda. Hugs and Smiles to you.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • wildfiredreamer
    August 31, 2008

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    Sandy this is so beautiful. I feel your heart poured into this and your love shines brightly through it. Losing a child no matter what the age has to be one of the hardest things a mother can go through. Bless you dear one.

    Rhonda


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 3, 2008
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      Thank you Rhonda. Your comment means alot to me. Bless You, Sandy
  • Bob Fox
    August 31, 2008

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    That loss

    Words can not ease the pain of such a loss. Only the heart truly knows what is felt inside and only the beauty of a poets words could make that so very clear. Sadly beautiful write Sandy.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 3, 2008
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      Thank You Bob, Always enjoy reading your comments. You have a wonderful day.

      Sandy
  • chiefmac
    August 31, 2008

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    How loving and dedicated to one so dear to have passed from this world to be at God's becon. Faith holds our silence, tears, desire to touch a final time until joined in heaven. Hearts are lifted without the question why answered. Friends hold one another up to make a path to each other with a smile, pat, hug reminders one will give hope for another tears to pass before God as he shares the blessings of his wine.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 1, 2008
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      So Lovely and Uplifting.

      Thank you dear friend. As always, your words are very uplifting. This comment was so beautiful and touches my heart. Thank you for the much needed compassion and smile it brings ads I read it. You take care and have a blessed day. Hugs and Smiles.

      Sandy

  • June-bug
    August 31, 2008

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    Sandy this is so beautiful..and as a mother you have captured everything a child brings to our lives. You have every right to ask why? Even in faith we do ask questions to try to find understanding. God Bless You!


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 1, 2008
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      Wonderful My Friend

      Thank you June, I so appreciate this thoughtful comment. Your compassion is very uplifting and means alot to me. Take care.

      Blessings To You,
      Sandy
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