Dancing to every single beat of my heart.
She sings my fears away when I'm afraid to go to sleep.
Simplicity is her goal, happiness is her desire.
Someone much more beautiful than any creature ever known.
She sees in the eyes of mother nature.
Mending whoever's hurt, finding whatever's lost.
Making this ugly world seem so serene.
I'd die to let myself fall for the scenery.
Everytime she looks into the sun,
It's easy to see that she's peaceful at heart.
Nothing would ever let her feelings bend.
She wouldn't keep me down for the death of me.
She may be invisible when I'm crucially hurt,
Or doing someting that I'm better than.
But when all else fails, and I stop thinking wholey,
She inspires me to remember how far I've come.
Author notes
My conscience and my muse are the same two people.
I named her Delilah because it just came to me.
I have a lot to thank my muse for.
A contest entry
- A Contest for your Muse!!! -- by Florida Sunshine.
450 points, ended September 17, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I can relate to your feelings of conscience -- relating to your muse. [Your inner thoughts]. So much you've describe I feel too-- The imagery and the emotion you've penned can clearly be seen.
Nice name for your muse... Thanks for entering the contest ~ it was my pleasure to read and review your work.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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