Where are your arms that once could not ever let me go.
Your eye's that pierced through me.
And moments so untouchable.
You have become more like a stranger that only see's
me, when you feel threatened that I may get to lonely.
That I may have felt the need to find some one who will
give me that passion again.
The nights I lay beside you and you turn and face the wall
silent tears that control my heart become my nightmare.
Yet you will not admit or speak of what has become of your heart.
I beg of you to surrender me to go free and not play this
game with my soul.
Please tell me what you think
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pain and hurt is how i feel
you wrote this with alot of relation
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surrender me, but don't slaughter!
heart.
I beg of you to surrender me to go free and not play this
game with my soul. " very heart touching words of pain indisregarding love from the partner. These words touch the heartof any man who thinks clean and decent of love. Thank you dear whispering poetess.
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wow! this could be written for so many of us that have been in this situation when love has died. there is nothing compared to this! the picture has a story of its own to tell. what sadness depicted here.
brilliant writing my friend!!!!
SilverButterfly
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SUCH TENDER HEARTACHE!!!!
These things which do seem so subtle reaches deep into ones heart and puts there an incredible feeling of being alone and afraid.
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Wow, this is very deep and sad.
Such a terrible position for people
to find themselves in. When our
relationships starts to fall apart,
we try to do everything that we can
to mend each other's hearts. But,
sometimes the pain and anguish is so
strong that it is impossible to recover.
Letting go of a love that doesn't want
you can be the hardest thing in this
world and what's worse is when that
person won't let go as well.
Brilliant work on this picture!
I enjoyed reading it and thanks a lot
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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