Whenever you feel down,
Just look up into the sky
And look for the parting in the clouds,
And as the sun tries to creep through,
Just stop...and think...
Soon enough, that sun
Will fill the sky with glorious,
Enchanting rays.
So when you're feeling down,
Isn't that something to look forward to?
And when it comes,
I'm sure you'll be there, thinking...
"Wow, that was worth waiting for!"
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Autumn Whisper
A contest entry
- [cheer me up] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended September 7, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the sentiments behind this poem, you have a very sunny outlook on life. I needed this right now as I live in England and like you in Wales we seem to have had nothing but rain, for what seems like forever.
All the best
Sue
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Thanks very much Sue. The weather lately has been so terrible, with the floods and whatnot - but hopefully the sun will come out one day...
Thanks again
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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A bright and cheerful outlook on life. Here in Arizona we get more than our fair share of the sun and it is great!
Patty
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Good descriptions
It is what I needed to read a few eeks ago. The sun had not come out for a while. Cheered me up!
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awww, this is very sweet, im sure this put a smile to her face
good luck in the contest and take care
Stephanie ♥
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aw, this is cute and I like the thoughts in it. I also like the imagery that it brought to mind. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering.
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Thanks whiterabbit--x. It's a great contest! Good luck with the judging.
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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thank you
♥
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