the trees have died,
you feed me like the sun,
dripping honey into cuts and burns
of someone come undone,
the star-light in the distance
is fading into ebony
the silver of your eye-light
in the twilight meaning more to me,
than anything you could think of,
anything you know,
you are the world to me,
and all my love goes with you as we go...
we are no more, going slowly like the wind
through the pages of a love-story
you're breath is gentle on my skin
and slowly it will bury me
and your gaze burns through my bones
because all you see is all of me
the known and unknown,
the phases i have been
you were always my star...
you are. built with concrete arms
you stopped me falling through the cracks
and the drains of the streets,
losing my mind in an alley
with some man that i might meet,
from skpping puddles like a child,
to shivers in the dark,
you were always there beside me
you're the one who holds my heart.
and you brought me back to me,
and made me into a person,
not just plastic - no emotion,
and i love you
and i need you
but the dust is laying thick
and although we're not together now
you'll always be my favourite.
Author notes
meh i'll come back to it... im too upset
Please tell me what you think
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this made me feel all sorts of things i just cant describe the images that were in my head while i was reading this were heartbreakingly beautiful. i cant even pick a favourite part. its weird how some of the most amazing pieces of writing come out of such horrible feelings. i really hope you're doing ok love. if you ever need to talk, im here
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there is something about your poetry that is comforting to me. whenever I see you've posted something it makes me happy to know that I'll be able to read from you.
I'm sorry that you are feeling so much hurt right now. I wish there was something I could say that would ease you right now but there is nothing expect for the fact that in the future you will love again. I don't know if that can help you now but I hope you feel better. Ugh. Now I'm just rambling.
I love you
♥
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honey, this is lovely.
it makes me feel so so sad but i understand completely, like the hurt and the need and the inescapableness of it all.
i hope your okay<3
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I think I know what you're talking about...and I want to hug the pain away.
I don't want to comment on the poem...I want to take your ache away. As beautiful as the pain is.
I need you to feel something other than pain.
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Heartbreaking Con, ):
but beautiful.
message me on myspace if you need to talk.
Ly.
x
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Oh babe
Please talk to me... this hurts and I don't want you to feel like this. Everything was beautiful but it cut me open. Love you sweety, don't forget I'm here for you 
Jeanette*~
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shit con
this is so sad
so so sad
i know it too well
it hurts that you're feeling like this, that you're hurting
what happened?
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