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The love I feel

I sit on my bed in my room,
Thinking of you in the gloom,
I feel my heart aching,
I知 yours for the taking,
A rose, still waiting to bloom.

I talk to you every single day,
Waiting for the time to melt away,
I値l be with you soon,
Under stars and the moon.
And I値l be wanting to stay.

We値l sit and stare into each others eyes,
Under the cool and clear-lit skies,
I値l look at your face,
Lie in your embrace,
And hope that our love never dies.

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  • Dark Prince Chaos
    October 21, 2008

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    beautiful i loved it it was charming and romantic like art it was and with great flow ^_^ -bows- great work indeed


  • Darkened Seraph
    October 1, 2008

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    WEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Steph is in love, Steph is in love I love the rhyming in this it works really well with the flow and the imagery is really nice, a really good poem well done, i hope you have happy times together

  • Poco Loco
    September 1, 2008

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    oooooohhh...somones in love
    aww im happpy for u sweetie...who is it who is it???
    Great poem with great imagery
    xxx