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A Promise Made

Relationships will stretch and bend,
I'm here with you through the end.
It is not words that show we care,
it's knowing you are always there.

Life brings challenges and fire,
know you're my only desire.

Though we grumble and even fight,
it's you beside me in the night.
When it seems we stumble and fall,
the strength of our love holds us all.

A promise was made to never let go;
that my dear you should always know.

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Congratulations on your 200th day, I'm glad I could be part of it.

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  • Topaze gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    A lovely piece written with passion and insight, thank you for your fine entry in this contest. PS I believe you meant stumble in line 9 but it's all good.


    • TheStarvingArtist
      September 1, 2008
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      Nice catch! Yes I did. I usually review my work before submitting it. I was distracted by a "demanding for my attention" teenager.

      Thank you for your kind understanding.