As I swim in the water it lurks beneath;
ardent eyes and dagger-like teeth.
It bit my arm so I slapped its face
then swam for my life but it gave chase.
I reached the sand but it didn't stop there,
the thing rose from the water with matted fur.
I sprinted forwards, as fast as a car,
but the crazy thing followed me into the bar!
My tired eyes rested on its wet, pink nose
then I looked at the barman and ordered two strongbows.
Author notes
Wrote for a really coll pic prompt
A contest entry
- 10,000 POINTS ~ LANDSLIDE HUMOR - WHO IS THE FUNNIEST POET ON AP? ROUNDS CONTEST ~ 4th contest on the brighter side of life! ~#111~ PLEASE LOOK INSIDE by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended September 4, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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LOL!
Like I like this!It didn't seem to forced and it focused on one topic!WOW!Silver trophy winner!LUCKY!lol So like I really enjoyed reading this one!And best of luck in future contests!
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Haha, funny ending to this piece and a nice job with the prompt!! I saw the picture while the contest was going but couldn't come up with anything. This is a real original, humorous piece.
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This was a great funny poem and I really liked the imagery. thanks so much for posting.
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You made it to the bar and after a few Strongbows hey
Great take on the prompt....nicely penned 
Good luck in the contest.
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lol this has great flow and rhyme as well as is a fun read, good write
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest....
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Hmm, I don't really understand the ending of this poem; not sure what a strongbow is xD
but, i liked the idea of it - especialyl the cat following you over the sand, i never thoguht to explore that it might have paws rather than fins
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thanks for the comment, and a strongbow is a type of cider
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