Sit there, watching me
pull my strings
laugh and tease
Dollie please
let me go
i want to live
i want to die
Hold my hands up to the sky
laugh and cry
don't you know?
Dollie please hear me out
I want to yell, scream and shout
sit until you let me go and pout
No one knows what we're about
you hold is so strong
I want to smash your face
it'd be easy to let you break
but my strings you pull, i'm fake
buying you was a mistake
god, it was so wrong....
Your dark eyes hurt me so
black hair ebbs and flows
Dress that came from where..? who knows...
Laughing at me, your lips glow
I grab your arm, yank your hair
Close my eyes so you can't stare
Against the ground, do you fare?
I hear you thud, you land where?
I see you on the ground
I see i'm not a puppet now
your eyes i pluck, i hear you howl
Deep with in me comes a growl...
I'm free!
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A contest entry
- &&then.she.fell by Number 13.
600 points, ended October 7, 2008, 24 entries
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Intense
i can feel the rythm of this peom, well done -
hmmm so i dont knoe i like it though you do a really good job writing for contestss i always have problems!!!
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hehehe, wow...this is awesome, love the begining, lovely job and good luck,
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wow
simply wow lol

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thanks ^_^
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