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interlude

once a week
lost in the tangled
sheets of hotel beds
in illicit embrace
we find
ourselves
for a single hour
not him
not her
but us

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  • vacygnet
    September 9, 2008
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    I withdrew from your contest and the site.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Very touching immagery especially the last line is the philosphy of this poetic journey......I love this inspiring work..well done..and thanks for sharing it..