Day after day,
dream after dream,
hour to hour, from
breath to breath,
I am still in love with you.
Thoughts of you tangled
in my guts scream themselves out
into me,
and I am trembling,
violently, with it all deep inside.
It is killing me.
Being chased by these memories round and round,
trying to hide myself between the folds of my spirit,
but where can you hide within yourself?
How can I forget you?
How can I escape this?
Day after day,
dream after dream,
after dream after dream,
waking up crying with
visions taunting me I had tried
to lock away, demons of my soul.
Pining miserably with the knowledge
that I am the past you despise,
breath to breath,
loving you still.
loving you still.
Author notes
I am hurting horribly right now.
So this poem isn't that great - kinda immature-like - and I'm sorry for that.
Please tell me what you think
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wow I don't think this was bad it's really good. it's like a song or something, I really liked this, even though it's coming froma difficult point and time for you.
Great Write and I hope you feel better.
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No no, this IS good- and I admire you for being able to pour out your feelings and post it on the web for the world to see.
Thank you for sharing and I hope you felt better after writing this piece.
p.s. I think you might disagree- but it's not love that hurts- it's when other kinds of bad feelings (anger, jealousy, possession to name a few?) get into the picture that twist the pure concept of love.
Anyway, all the best yeah -
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nah, I kinda do agree.
but I also think "pure love" - the completely unconditional kind? - is very hard to attain, don't you? -
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Yep, it is very hard to attain..because a lot of the time, people find it hard to be completely honest about who they are and what they want, and this creates all kinds of problems... For true/pure love, yeah I think it's very hard to come by. But there's no harm in hoping (and waiting) right?
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