Your innocent laugh
evokes such pure notes
and the warmth
of your small body in my arms
resonates a passionate song
within this mother's heart.
Along the rim of my soul
rose petals velvet softness
caress my exultation
in the joy only you could bring.
Your world is new;
run wild little one,
discover the beauty
you hold within
and may creation tingle
in the rapture
of your wondrous spirit.
Author notes
Wordbank #7
Words Used In Order - laugh, warmth, song, rim, rose, caress, new, run, wild, tingle.
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 3: Word Banks by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended September 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is truly beautiful! This piece is special,an inspiration to any parent, and parent to be.
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Excellent
Another creative and masterful write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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A beautiful poem and excellent use of the word bank. Good luck in the contest.
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This is so sweet! And the artwork does go so well with the poem. Good job
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What a sweet poem for a little child. It would be glorious if all children couild be subject to such praise through their lives. Very nice.
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Thank you for your entry, good luck
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Wonderful
May I ask you something? My daughter has a lil boy now 13 months old. She worships him and is at the happist time of her life. If I give you my E mail will you send me this poem to forward to her?
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