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Shall we die together now

I give you all of me
to throw in my face
to do with what you please

I give you my body
my ultimate fear
just to keep you safe and near

I hunger for the love you provide
killing me slowly
Unable to survive

I sprinkle my love
all over you
but i promise, this is the best i can do

Sometimes i smile, sometimes i cry
all because of you
And a torrent of lies

You are my poison
a toxin i drink
making my unable to feel or to think

My hearts wings flutter
when you are around
with love and fear i shudder

A child i want
but you won't give
How do you expect me to go on and live?

This cloud i find
a silver lining
that all the pain hides behind

the tears fall
all over the place
i want to be angry, to smash your face

The dark blue sky tempest
full of confusion and ache
It seems that my heart you want to forsake

How do i do this,
how to move on
when i want your kiss
your touch and so on...
Hold me close
don't let go
it's me you chose...

sorry but 'til death you're stuck.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is a great take on the prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • takemypainaway
    August 31, 2008
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    awsome poem i havent looked at the pic yet but this is a really good poem!!