A few words for whoever weaves my dreams,
with few threads to wrap and woof to set,
joining some difficult phrases scattered else;
to say love you, fled from an evading thought.
Thank you for our fairy tale, lustily woven,
dyed yesterday in depths of bodies burning,
in golden works of surrender to let me drill,
as an embroidered soul gasping to lure senses.
Some directions to master weaver, to continue;
operating looms non-stop in ecstatic existence;
from raw to finished our affairs within glitters;
to deliver wrapped in satiny loving paper desires.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- PIF/Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
1000 points, ended September 1, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best of the best... by Jfd.
1500 points, ended February 3, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the first stanza was def. my favorite, this was beautiful and it had an interesting tone, thank you for taking the time to enter!
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Beautiful
Gentle words lift within the silks of life and love
Best wishes and many congratulations on the Gold
Julie
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nicely crafted . . good take on the prompt . . liked "joining some difficult phrases" and "in golden works of surrender" . . congrats on the gold
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Nice job. Very well done. Congratulations on the gold cup.
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Ahh truly a beautifully woven piece here.
Thank you so much for your entry
gaylene
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