doll , a red and blue strip hat
With a checkered stoned face
Pressed against the glass of a clown face
Star spangled banner sing for me
Trace her body and you’ll see tattoo marks bee stings of hate
Engraved of desert thorns
Marking history of all the slaves till this day
Thorns of all the fake laughs and a half
Play the game now why don’t you
First check mate
Then you check
Cigars stains against ur teeth of gold
Now smile for me baby
Move to mesmerize,
Hyp-no-tize
Shed your skin like a snake strike,
im
still
breathing
With a single glance it all grew colder
Wana play tea party or police
Turned to nightmares all so sweet
Now geisha serves the tea
Police plays
one .
two .
three .
shots set you free
Lets play merry go round, somewhere in the
lost nowhere to be found.
Catch me if you can, just follow chalk lines, watch the light leave dark eyes
I spy foundation stacked mascara clinging against lens eyes that can’t cry
Lips of cherry bite till they bleed
Oh pretty fairy lets rip her wings
She dared to dream
Enslave her. sell her screams
Gleaming lights blinding life
Movie needs some drama
Forgot theres something called karma
adrenaline rush.. like fire through my black veins
Race to die faster
Load the gun fire shot
execute souls with crystal tears crashing against windowsills
playing forgotten voices
Like a cyclone wrathful killing dreams
face held against pillows then you can scream
You’ll get lost in the ocean waves carrying your forgotten tales
conscious lets all pretend
Scenes ready leave ur mark
lipstick stain. on ur glass of wine with words left unspoken
Candle light plays tricks with my glass eyes reflecting all your lies and you whisper how my eyes mesmerize
theres the wizard of oz
except its all black hole falls
buildings going
higher
higher
elevating prison walls
entrapped, Lost within each nightmare memory
Daydreams haunt me
And I dive.
Within Ragged curtains playing moonlight shadows across the room
Moon pieces cut shattered across the land each with a secret
to make sure you’ll never be found
Angels cradle me on milkways with wings
Guitar strings cut bleeding from silent notes lost in time
Ashes ashes and it all falls down
rock aby baby don’t you cry
lullaby by baby don’t u hide
“and he could have anything .. that wasn’t already gone –“
A contest entry
- OPTIONS! ^-^ no rules? what? by Sick Sunshine.
300 points, ended September 12, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Option #3: Manic! Crazy! Weird?
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I can see why the gold for this is awesome.. i love every word in every line and the way you penned them.. so well done as always wow!! hugs always Angel♥
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THANK YOU!
glad you liked it.. i havnt been able to write like that in a long time..for some reason..
but ur poetry by far beats mine!
<3
much love
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Guitar strings cut bleeding from silent notes lost in time
this line really impressed me, but the whole thing didn't really make much sense, to be honest. still it was a good piece of poetry. thank you for entering. however, you didnt follow my rules so i will have to DQ you. SORRY -
wow this is great. i love like...everything! theres like no filler, the whole thing is like just amazing
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=D thank you hun... its all jibberash
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Master Piece
Damn! Now this is the kind of writing I wake up in the morning for! You've set the bar to beat. Your my #1 choice so far. Now I'm defiantly drawn in to read more...
Clever tricky minds..MANIC CRAZY AND WEIRD. -
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Thanks =D im glad you liked it . your much to kind.
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Hey this is a seriously cool poem... I love it! I love your form and tone.. Keep it up!
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Thanks .. im glad u loved it. its something i wrote when i was just lost and started writing whatever came to mind..
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