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For you

The stars are overhead,
and I only think of you,
these memories are the ones I miss,
the ones where you are beside me.

Your face brings me smiles,
your voice brings me happiness.

In the end I hope you realize,
that there is room on this world for you.

And so I fade,
into the world we've created,
where the sun always shines,
and the world smiles.

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*Walls-within...hope this brings a smile...

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  • whiterabbit.
    August 31, 2008

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    I really like this. It's beautifully written and so sweet. I really like the imagery that this brings to mind. Great job and thanks so much for entering.
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