I can tell you don't want me,
When you get that look in your eye.
Your look stings me and makes me shiver.
It makes me feel like the epitome of unwanted.
Aborted life seeps from my eyes as you watch.
I don't know why these tears fall,
They are numb reminders of what humanity is.
Each tear cascading down my cheek,
Is another drop for your cup of intolerance.
Insults are beginning to fall on dead ears,
And this dead hollow heart takes no notice.
I am like a discarded piece of wrapper;
Everything gone from the inside now just garbage.
There is one thing I will confess though.
If you want you perfect fairytale life,
With me out of sight, out of mind.
You have to be out of your mind,
Because I don't plan on leaving yet.
Author notes
I just felt like writing something down. So this isn't very good because it didn't really have any structure just random sentences of emotion strung together to form paragraphs. Enjoy raw emotion at its 'finest'.
What did you think?
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Hood Winked!
I think this is a very strong poem. You have the strong image of a discarded (candy) wrapper, and the defiance at the end, which shows a sense of sticking up for your rights.
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Im trying my best to eliminate this type of emotion from that head of yours.
"You have to be out of your mind,
Because I don't plan on leaving yet. "
Apart from the whole thing being awesome (ie, with awe!), this line reallllllly realllllllly stands out to me, such a strong feeling and emotion. Gives me another sense of your strong dedication lol.
Loveded it.
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I like the way you have written this poem. The way you describe empty shells and a no being. Someone without their soul! Well done!
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Awww thanks for the points!
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