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The Random Years in Muscovy

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Why! Little Figchen, how you’ve grown!

Remember me? I was your nurse

In days gone by, back in Stettin.

But now I look at you with awe –

The random years in Muscovy

Have made you into Queen of Queens,

A Russian eagle on your shield –

And that’s a scepter in your hand!

 

They tell me you’re the patroness

Of art and of philosophy,

That music echoes in your court;

Voltaire, d’Alembert, Diderot,

And other thinkers, at your sign

Bow down, and call you “Northern Star”;

While you, enthroned in Petersburg,

Rule from Kamchatka to Tallinn.

 

I think of you as Hatshepsut,

Or Sammu-Ramat, Babel’s Queen,

Ma’atkare, Ishtar reborn;

Far greater than Elizabeth –

The dunghill dame of Albion,

That childless pawn of history –

Conniving courtiers fail to sway

The Mother of the Motherland.

 

Some call you tyrant, I can’t say

What truth there is in jealous words;

I’m only dazzled by the sun,

The riches of the Hermitage,

The ideals of enlightenment…

I want to cradle you again,

But you’re a queen, and I’m a ghost…

Oh, little Figchen – how you’ve grown!

 

 

Author notes

Sophie Friederike Auguste von Anhalt-Zerbst-Domburg, later Tsarina Yekaterina II Velikaya of the house of Romanov, Empress of Russia. Born 1729 in Stettin, in the Kingdom of Prussia (now Szczecin, Poland); died 1796 in Sankt Petersburg, Russia. Ruled her empire for 34 years.

Card III – a symbol of power and structured growth, art and disciplined creativity, motherhood and enterprise.

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  • maa gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    amazing ...
    you have captured the essence of this tarot-card so beautifully and lively ...
    both, the motherly, as well as the crone-aspect of the empress are approached with mastery ...
    I love the ending, where the nurse (universal mother) reminds the queen of the little girl (innocence) still dwelling within her ...


  • Dark Otter
    September 10, 2008

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    My favorite so far!

    This has a tone to it that I find unique. What you packed into a comparatively short poem is incredible. The amount of research that I would have to do to understand it would give me a headache. So, I won't. I'll just tell you what I like about it. You thought outside the box. It is expansive. The sense of history to this is compelling. The 'empress' in royal form is certainly a valid expression of the concept. Your fourth stanza is a plethora of descriptions that won me completely over. Once again, I bow to you, poetess. (Don't you ever get tired of winning) You are the fool, the magician, the high priestess and the empress. I feel like the joker. Adieu to you.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 10, 2008
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      If ever I lose it won't worry me - "I'll be too busy looking good" (Jim Kelly in "Enter the Dragon")


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    September 1, 2008
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    Three bald-headed patriarchal clappies for your fabulous feminist figchen.

  • Bad Bill
    August 31, 2008

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    Excellent

    I very much like the language you employ in this wonderful piece--language not only eminently suited to convey the Imperial Court of Russia in the 18th century Enlightenment period, but also the great sweep of history prior to that. I especially love the description of the Virgin Queen as "The dunghill dame of Albion."

    High order stuff, a chara Albanach.

    Best wishes,
    Bill

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 31, 2008
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      Yeah I had to write that with gritted teeth, because she is one of my favourite historical characters - a feminist icon. A touch controversial regarding Ireland of course, but that is par for the course since the bloody Normans set foot there!

      Glad you like it.


  • Tirrell
    August 31, 2008

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    A lovely story laced in history, this one calls to me as if from the dark, a beautiful and haunting tale. Simply wonderful and rich in imagery!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    You really do want me to wake up don't you!!!

    This isn't a first thing in the morning poem this is a well after the first couple of cuppas poem!
    Superb stuff but jammed with content in a way that I can't take before breakfast


    Back now re-reading with tea and shreddies inside. Great stuff


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 31, 2008

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      You've been up for hours - bloody big breakfast! Or just late?

      • cricketjeff gold member
        August 31, 2008
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        being awake and being up are not concomitant. Wonderful storm started with a house shaking strike ensuring I was awake


        • Mairi bheag gold member
          August 31, 2008
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          OK, be pedantic. Just don't stand under a tree.

          • cricketjeff gold member
            August 31, 2008
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            Oh what siblings we can be
            Linked in mutual pedantry
            Writing free or writing form
            Argue up a thunderstorm
            The comment did take about an hour and a half to finish


            • Mairi bheag gold member
              August 31, 2008
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              ... and no doubt you feel it was worth the effort.


              • cricketjeff gold member
                August 31, 2008

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                the original comment not the rhyme, rhyming's a doddle it is FV and prose that take effort


                • Exit-Stage-Right
                  September 1, 2008
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                  re:

                  "rhyming's a doddle it is FV and prose that take effort "

                  Hear, hear!


                • Mairi bheag gold member
                  August 31, 2008
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                  That's why I thought I would dash off some blank verse for you. Rings the changes a bit.

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