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Tears

They stane my cheeks as they stream
There not for you but to remind me of my feelings
My feelings for you....I wish they would just die
But they never do that do they.

You said it yourself, but did you really mean it
Maybe you didn't but maybe you did
I will never really know will I
I guess not, but it maybe to soon to tell.

But for now they stane my cheeks
This hot and clear liquid
Flowing from the eyes
Sting, red and puffy, they close and I fall asleep

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  • EmoBear
    November 25
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    Great.

    I liked it. It really set a mood and a lot of people can probably relate to this.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    Hummm..the tears are always very effective in life and in poetry as well....well done..and my thanks for sharing it...