Sacrosanct stardust scatters,
beneath each treasure trove.
Awaiting their cognizant cue,
from these unparallel dreams.
Each sacrificing,
every obligatory ounce of,
unremitting energy.
Wailing with each globule of sweat,
just wanting to be heard,
even if it’s all in vain.
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Prompt will go here: What lies in-between your unfulfilled dreams
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ come join in ~ 10 poets Prompt given when by blondone.
600 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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Full of emotions and great imagery a lovely flow makes this a great read thank you for entering sorry it has taken so long to judge but I am having trouble with the internet
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awww, this is very good, love your take on the prompt, good luck in the contest and take care *hugs*
Stephanie ♥
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Well written, nice take on the prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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