Dripping with denial,
clarity coughs up some realization-
Taking a break
is just one step away
from actually being broken.
So, find strength in
simply moving forward
along this journey
From hopeful
to hopeless...
Author notes
What lies in-between your unfulfilled dreams
jadedsnapdragon Amaranthine Lover
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A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From August 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like your first line here "Dripping with denial,
clarity coughs up some realization-" -
Dripping with denial,
clarity coughs up some realization- ...
that first line is a doozy... had me hook line and sinker ... great piece!!!!
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The emotions are strong the words flow with ease life is a struggle at times moving on is the key... thank you for entering sorry its taken me so long to judge my internet keeps jumping off line
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and back again
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Great take on the prompt. I have enjoyed the wisdom penned into this writ. The flow was wonderful, and the emotional environment intriguing. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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Well written, nice take on the prompt. I really liked this part: "Taking a break
is just one step away
from actually being broken."
Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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straight from the heart
true unfilled dreams feel that way at times...
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