As I lie
As I sleep
I dream my little dream
I am tall
I am free
I am all i can be
I can sing
I can dance
I have every single chance
Maybe these dreams will come true.
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ come join in ~ 10 poets Prompt given when by blondone.
600 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think? anything not make sense.. use lines
Comments
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Lovely all so true I say it is our dreams we live for very nicely done thank you for entering and sorry its taken so long to judge but my internet is going off ever time I log on...


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very nice
I'm kinda partial to them myself! I like this write!
much luck to you in the contest!

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Very nicely done for the prompt. The thing about dreams is we have to strive for them while we are awake. I find it exhausting. Best of luck... Scott


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well said,
you never know about dreams.
hope yours come true
Good luck in the contest
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thans for commenting
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