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Sweet Dreams

As I lie
As I sleep
I dream my little dream
I am tall
I am free
I am all i can be
I can sing
I can dance
I have every single chance

Maybe these dreams will come true.

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  • blondone
    September 1, 2008

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    Lovely all so true I say it is our dreams we live for very nicely done thank you for entering and sorry its taken so long to judge but my internet is going off ever time I log on...


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    very nice

    I'm kinda partial to them myself! I like this write!
    much luck to you in the contest!


  • Griswold gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    Very nicely done for the prompt. The thing about dreams is we have to strive for them while we are awake. I find it exhausting. Best of luck... Scott


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    well said,
    you never know about dreams.

    hope yours come true

    Good luck in the contest

    Passions

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