Whispers of soft gentle tones
harmonize the senses
say it again
Laughter of tantalizing
joy beyond happiness
say it again
Shivers of peaceful
tranquility surrender me
say it again
Yet you could never say it
enough for I really do
LOVE YOU, TOO
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Love! by SincerelyMegan.
575 points, ended September 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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I would have liked more detail,
in the poem you talk about how "your" senses were harmonized by gental tones...
I think I should probably feel more from this poem than it suggests.
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Ah..the sweetness and the beautiful tone is around the immages bringing the music of love..well done...thanks for sharing..
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Loved this one. Loved how you kept the words say it again at the end of each stanza. really caught my eyes. Good job
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