look how we've changed
you've grown up
and I've stayed the same
which one of us is right?
I'm tired and I want to just give in
but you said giving in
isn't what I'm supposed to do
which one of us is right?
but life would be
so much easier.
Author notes
I'm not exactly sure how this fits in, but coupled with my mood and that quote it's what i spat out.
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ come join in ~ 10 poets Prompt given when by blondone.
600 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yes we do have many dreams and it is hard to choose just one and you are so right life is not easy thank you so much for entering and sorry it has taken me so long to judge my internet won't say on
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Very nicely written, a great take on the prompt. I find myself arguing with myself often. Great thing about that is I always win, bad thing about it was sometimes the cops got involved.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Awesome job hubby
Mylee
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Wonderful and unique take on the prompt. In life, we find ourselves often, either out growing or being out grown. Either way, it seems as if we leave something behind that can never be regained. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes in the comp
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thanks, that's the first thing that's made sense all day
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interesting take on the prompt
best wishes in the contest
hope your mood picks up
Love
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