i want to disappear
erase all traces
hide behind words
no more faces
and i'm not even sure
how to feel anymore
when all I want to do
is lay down and die
and words won't even
help me out this time
pace back forth
maybe nervously
maybe not
but all i know is
my words don't live
here anymore
Author notes
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A contest entry
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aww...I like this poem...Its very sad but its a really really good write
brilliant
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I'm hoping this is only a write and shows no reflection upon your feelings. This almost made me cry!! You can't make me cry or your cookies will be too salty
Mylee
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