Wrong Exchange

Between the seams of my dreams

lays a golden light of sweet delight.

When things seem to become a scheme

I bring my heart to fight for what seems right.

When a dream shatters my heart scatters

and I search awhile to find life's smile.

Within the gaps pain splatters but the only thing that matters

is the fulfillment we seek while, making dreams fit our life style.

Yet in when theres a break, we make a mistake

and from dreams we wake, making reality our keepsake.

A contest entry

Quickie ~ come join in ~ 10 poets Prompt given when by blondone. 600 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
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Swangrnv
August 31, 2008

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well if it ain't..
That word wizard, that pro..
who writes with the passion everybody know..
You're probably getting another shiny yo! l.o.l.
excellent my friend!
cricketjeff
August 31, 2008

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Internally rhymed curtal Shakespearean beautifully done!

great stuff
Griswold
August 31, 2008

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Reality, what a concept. Beautifully done sweetheart, a joy to read the internal rhyme. I Love you baby...Scott
Swan song
August 31, 2008

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Excellent double rhyme in this poem When a dream shatters my heart scatters I like that line and it is so true. Seems like you have to run around a while and try to find where it is lol
In Too Deep1
August 30, 2008

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An intriguing take on the prompt. I loved the flow, along with the internal rhyme. Wonderful message indeed. It has been a while since I have read your pieces. This is an honor, and a most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
- PassionsPromise
  August 30, 2008
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  thanks hon for your comment i appreciate it
Griswold
August 30, 2008
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Hey baby.