left? Right? Neither matters here.
You will always wind up where you start
many roads with one destination
In this city with no heart
Circular city with circular roads
many ways in and one way out
Once you're here you're trapped for good
No other way you can ever rerout
Good school, good people, good city
southern hospitality in a little southern town
but this perfect place has no soul
and leaves me feeling a little run-down
I need to breath and feel alive
bulid a life where no one knows my name
start all over and never look back
go where no one knows my shame
plan a way out in the dead of the night
run away from no one for no one ever knows
they know not where I've gone
I'm in the great unknown; no one from here goes
start and end in the same place
day after ever-loving day
I am taking the one road out
of this circle where I lay
Author notes
this is about a town that i live in. its growing but still too small to hold me. I'm smothered and trapped. This town litterally is a circle and I'm findin my way out...
A contest entry
- Circles - BIG POINTS!! by CelticQueen.
1500 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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RUN!!! I GOT OUT SO CAN YOU!!!
Run fast and far Breana! I know where you are and what you feel!!! Just run and never look back. Thats what I did and look where I am know. Fort Jackson SC...wait... I ran pretty darn far...Dont run as far as me, lol but do get out asap. lol
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Well, good luck to you! Thanks for entering my contest. cq
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Great write , i liked it alot. Sometimes people just need space to breathe and something new to give them a feeling of life in itself. Dont be trapped by the same everyday thing , find something new inside of it and explore. Good job again and i hope you find what you were looking for. =]
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