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Sweets for the Sweet

I love you like cheesecake!
Sinful
Decadent
Unique

I love you like cookies!
Soft
Round
Nutty

I love you like pudding!
old-fashioned
yummy
delightful

I love you like donuts!
airy
hole-in-the-middle
sweet

You are the confection of my affection!
I love you my sweet!

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  • rinzurajan
    3 hours ago
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    cute and well thought out...good luck


  • Gypsy Via Orleans gold member
    June 21
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    Tis was cute and upbeat. Really sweet. LOL!
  • Topnotchsy
    November 6, 2008

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    Nice write. Another one I missed.

    This cracked me up:

    I love you like cookies!
    Soft
    Round
    "Nutty"


  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    sweeter than sweet

    love this with a comfort passion of desired and cherished friendship and family imingery, keep penning these cute poems
    Linda


  • wildfiredreamer
    September 2, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwww
    this is really cute
    I needed a chuckle
    glad I came across this one
    very delightful
    but you missed the chocolate


  • attack110
    September 1, 2008
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    That is so fantastic. I love that. very clever well done


  • ChickenPie
    September 1, 2008
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    sweet

    helps every girls craving tee hee


    • firefly53633
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks Chicken Pie!

      Must be busy huh? Haven't seen you much lately! Hope all is well. Thanks for the comments. Best regards
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