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Nothing Last Forever

I promised myself not to let it go/but you call and I melt into an enormous puddle/I saw you with her and it stuck like a knife in my shattered heart/I cry and let everything go/I yell,scream,beg,and dream in the darkness/I want you to know that everything you have put me through has made me so much stronger/but I look at you and want you and my feelings are longer and more complicated/like a dark,twisted road that never ends/torture is what you bring me/don't look into my eyes and see her/ don't kiss me and wish it was her perky lips you were kissing/don't call me and talk about memories with her/I know one day you will wake up and know it was me/you had me/you're going to want me in your arms again/I've seen it happen many of times/don't come tp me with you're problems and say your innocent/I saw you in the darkness with her/the look in your eyes I will never forget/so needy,saying "please me"/You're going to want to fall back into me/guess what baby/cheating is a factor/a simple reminder/that nothing lasts forever.

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god she drives me crazy.and the guy came crawling back and left without a second chance

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  • SincerelyMegan
    August 31, 2008

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    Sad poem.

    It was very deep and I feel for you.
    I really liked how you "spoke" to whomever it was who did this.

    It made it powerful.


  • trekkergirl
    August 31, 2008
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    ahhhh pooor girl. Good write