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Summer Flower










Frail fingers grasp outwards;
blood dripping down palm
white petals, stained red by pollen











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Prompt: Purity

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  • A63-Angel
    August 3
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    very beautiful. nicely written.


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    Intreguing words, but not sure I understand it or how it relates to purity. If you don't mind IM me to let me know I would appreciate it. the semi colon, and the comma are not needed, that I know of you can double check that if you like. I also think it could be shortened might make it more understandable.


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    September 3, 2008
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    this is short and beautiful.