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Raining Stars...

Delicate feet
balancing between

ridges of soft
fluffy clouds -

in her hands -
millions of shining
lovely stars

twinkling
and
twinkling -

the bright color
as the dress
adorning her small, frail
body.

Throwing each star -
softly

down to earth -

one
by
one

they drift...
slowly

caressing the
cool night,
with raining beauty.

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    August 1, 2009
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    lovely picture you paint...stardust...


  • XxXNoxiousRoseXxX
    September 2, 2008

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    I liked this. The way the lines are so short makes me think of rain. And the way you describe things is lovely.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 1, 2008

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    I love your closing line. This is such a soft, delicate write, great take on the prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • CatQueen248
    August 31, 2008

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    This was such a beautiful poem. It really went along well with the pic too. Good Luck in the contest.