Twisted and talented
With her freaky flow
Inspiring imaginations to
See what she knows
Thoughtful and intense
Eternally grasping my attention
Dear friend to those
Privileged with her affection
Indescribable personality
Shines through with might
Chaos reigns in her days
Energizing her nights
Submerging us in her brilliant light
Author notes
Man...I was having major brain fart issues writing this...so I hope this works...I always enjoy doing acrostics...but this one was harder for me Maybe cuz it's 2am and I am a bit drained...k...one more cookie then I'm off to bed! haha
What if Fred wore a skirt? If Fred starts wearing a skirt instead of his slacks...there's gonna be a problem! I'm gonna have to start regulating! And we don't want that! haha...k...
Hope ya like this! At least a little?
Written January 18th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ACROSTICALLY TWISTED by In-fin-ite.
350 points, ended January 19, 2004, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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You may be Loopy in name, but poetry is your game. Congratulations on a totally twisted piece... or is it pisce?
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Really well written. You seem to do really well with forms like this. For some reason they seem to suit your writing and what you end up writing about very well. This is another wonderful example. Great work.
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Oh, this is so wonderful! So sweet... wish my friends wrote stuff like this for me (and if any of you read this comment, *HINT HINT*)
Anyway, I'm sure it flattered her to no end, and the rhyming was great! I always have trouble rhyming my acrostics for some reason... Good luck in the contest and keep writing!
Kate
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This is all but perfect. I enjoyed the read. Another wonderful write.
Good luck in the contest...this is a top one I am sure.
Sam
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Beautifully said
Lo0opy,
This was such a great poem. The background suited this piece very well. After reading your poem, it inspired me to enter this contest. You had very lovely words. Inspiring, really. You wrote this well even though it was at 2am 
Good luck to you.
Smiles always,
Kristina
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K, I fixed the spelling error...I couldn't take it anymore! haha...you are right...I am super anal about that stuff...haha...so ya...no more indescribably
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terrific!!
Dang chick this is AWESOME!!! I was gonna enter but I too had major brain fart... This poem is amazing!! Way cool! I'm glad you wrote it!!
Hope you place!!!
~*KiDDo*~
aka Raina
p.s. Sorry for the short comment, I just woke up... -
Thanks for entering! Lo0opy entered, Lo0opy entered. Okay that said I really liked this it had me grinning. I did notice the spelling error and was quite thrown off because I know you are as anal as I am about things like that but it's all cool - I don't take off for spelling hehehehe. and I know about the boldy issue because I keep redoing my page to update for the year book announcements. As for Fred, why is everyone getting in a tizzy? I never said he wears a skirt I said what if he did . Lol. Maybe he just wants some freedom to hang ... or something ...
Thanks for entering and Good Luck!
~JayLynn
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Well written!!!!!
Lo0opy,
Great poem! I bet that Twistedpisce will enjoy this!
A beautiful poem! Humours too!
I know what you mean about the boldness... I had to do that many times! I hope I won't have to change it again, lol! Oh and I really like your background!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep on writing from the heart and soul.
Sincerely,
Nelak
BRAVO, LO0OPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is weird, I read your poem but I'm more concerned about Fred's major predicament. LOL
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