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~Essence of a Soul

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Single cell emergence,
placed in a womb for protection,
waiting to take first breath,
upon this earth. ~NS

Labyrinthine thoughts unknown,
sheltered in life's spiritual sphere,
evolving each movement,
aligned with time. ~PW

 

Here lies our destiny,

as the soul is born.

Body and mind still forming,

the essence of being. ~NS

 

With the arc of woman,

a particle phenomenon,

structured by the author,

through angel's breath. -PW

Author notes

Thanks Sie for sharing your thoughts with my own.
It's a pleasure penning poetry with you. ~pw

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  • Aimee Hill
    October 30, 2008

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    I have to say that first off... that picture is the stuff!

    You two have penned well with this write. I like how the poem started off as a birth, which was very well described.

    Excellent imagery!!


  • penman gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    A wonderful creation. So very touching and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.


  • I Can Only Be Me
    September 4, 2008
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    It's great to see that you still have it!


  • banrion
    September 2, 2008

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    That's absolutely beautiful. A wonderful take on the pic.
    Very well done. It was a joy to read.

    SJ


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    Beautiful indeed! Pam


  • moon2u
    September 1, 2008

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    Single cell emergence,
    placed in a womb for protection,
    waiting to take first breath,
    upon this earth. ~NS

    you have captured the essence of a soul
    exquisite, you write well together
    moon2u


  • CatQueen248
    September 1, 2008

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    Two brilliant minds couldn't have came up with anything better. Great write. Also thanks for the comment.


  • Sacred Ground
    September 1, 2008

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    Very nicely done, the both of you are entirely insync with this write. An absolutely phenomenal read!


  • logorrhoea
    August 31, 2008
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    yeah..

  • logorrhoea
    August 31, 2008

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    Pure thought

    You're ideas fit together well. Its a little like a sheet of woven Yuka with a sharply cut edge. Thoughtful outlook on the creation of a soul clearly communicated.


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    Wonderful write! I didn't know it was by two seperate people until I read the authors notes. It' seems to be by only one. You two have wrote as one and it worked perfectly! That is not easy to do I've tried without success I might add!

    Cayla


  • fireymoondancer
    August 31, 2008
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    applaud this

    Very good description of life. I love the part with the Angels breath. Very well put into words


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 31, 2008

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    The miracle of life
    portrayed with the delicate
    touch of angel's breath...

    A perfect partnership!

    Aesthete


  • earthstar
    August 30, 2008

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    That an incredible write. The picture is totally awesome.
    The word pictures one could see what you were meaning. I would not of thought of some thing so amazing. It hard to tell that there were two of you writing it. It flows like milk and honey sweet rich enlightening words


  • jojobear93
    August 30, 2008
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    this was a great poem


  • Sunkissed xo
    August 30, 2008

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    Wow.. this poem is amazing!
    Its profound depth, coupled with its beautiful imagery, makes it a truly excellent and enjoyable read.
    Thanks for sharing it, and keep up the excellent work!

    - Katelyn


  • Kazytc gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Breathtaking!

    This is just phenomenal, the message and essence are breathtakingly beautiful, empathic and 'knowing' which makes this very unique and also it is vitally important in the way that it expresses asceded thought and attunment.
    Beautiful poetic graphics so eloquently expressed all through to form a fabulous collaboration of twin and connected souls.
    Bravo, what a fantastic united poem, most enlightening and uplifting. Love it, write on.
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


  • seriouswheels731
    August 30, 2008
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    Wow.. nice

    Really insightful, truly a great write.

    Please comment my poems as well, thanks


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Angels breath...
    this was a greath taking read, it was amzing poetry
    well done you two.
    dolores xx


  • firefly53633
    August 30, 2008

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    Delightful!!!!!

    Such graceful words and cadence! Great cooperative effort! Beautiful thought penned sweetly upon the page! BRAVO! Standing ovation from me!!!!Kudos to you both! Best regards!


  • Mad Moon silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    Superb!!

    Wow What a team you two make! Gorgeous penning with vivid imagery to feed hungry minds. The words linger long after reading. I'd have to copy/paste its entirety to pick a favorite line or passage. Beautifully penned. Kudos to both of you!!


  • poetryrocksmysox
    August 30, 2008

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    Divine,

    An excellent collab weaved here by you two!
    love that angel's breath. ~sigh~ Lovely and filled with light~


  • penman gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a wonderful poetic gift you have created. So very well done. thank you for sharing.


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 30, 2008

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    Thanx for sharing !!

    wow an awesome paired write indeed. well worth saying Thank you Timothy with love for sending me the link. such magic spelled from the imagery of a minute cell a figment of thought and as time traipses though the years from each mysterious stage of life from fetus to birth to adulthood and the spirit of ones soul is painted in its purest of worded canvas. thank you for sharing and many blessings always xxxxx


  • poeticpieces
    August 30, 2008

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    Nice,

    A very well penned piece you two, I liked the way you captivate the reader here from the title on down. Great job Nature's Song, and Dad, you always What else is there to say! Love ya, your son, Timothy Jr. aka poeticpieces.


  • Nature Song silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    Tim,

    No the pleasure was all mine. Thank you for writing this collaboration with me! Hugs! ~Sie


    • poeticweaver gold member
      September 5, 2008
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      We did awesome here!

      Thanks for being you, shine on poetess!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Indeed a wonderful piece penned by you two.

    blessings in all you do

    Love

    Passionspromise


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    splendid my love just magnificant Mushy i think you two poets did a very great job and word performance remeber you are the King my love

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