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Insatiable (Hay(na)ku)

Mind
Burning, churning
With unquenchable desire

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Cannonsfire
    September 1, 2008

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    Well it is well done but to my mind I never get much out of this form, that is my own opinion and not on how you write the form. I just cannot see the passion in them. Thank you for the entry.


  • Slick99
    August 31, 2008

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    wow!!! this is really great!!! best of luck in the contest!!! -slick99


  • azure85 gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Wow, you are the best poet for haynakus I have ever read! This is another great one, good luck in the contest.